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#17 Private Low-Blow

November 17, 2009

Finishing his illustrious army career with symmetry, discharged with the same rank that he started with, Melvin Stone decided to use his untapped talents and penchant for hitting below the belt on the unsuspecting criminal populace of the civilian world. He became known for his distasteful tactics/fighting style and soon adopted the underworld’s name for him. He has become greatly feared and many of his foes have taken to surrendering without a fight. This has not deterred him from dealing out his personal form of painful justice.


"Crimeny! Did it have ta' be in me fellas?"



5 Comments leave one →
  1. Crash! Landen permalink
    November 18, 2009 1:26 am

    You do know ‘LB’ can sometimes be an abbreviated version of the word pound, right?

  2. Crash! Landen permalink
    November 18, 2009 1:27 am

    Thanks, Crash! I wasn’t aware of that…. You learn something new every day it seems.

  3. November 18, 2009 5:15 pm

    This cracked me up! It’s this kind of post that motivates me to work a little harder on my own…

  4. Crash! Landen permalink
    November 18, 2009 6:18 pm

    Thanks, Caine! Flattered by the comment. This made ME laugh, but you never know if anyone else will like it… I’m inspired to try and do better from all the creativity here, too. I think this was a good idea (the 30 Characters idea).

  5. November 20, 2009 3:13 am

    Funny character and well rendered. Priavate Low-blow and the criminal both make me laugh.

    I agree with your comments about the 30 characters idea being inspiring. It’s been a challenge for me, but so-worth-it for the inspiration and the practice.

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